Demonstrate Understanding of genre with film pitch


The only lifeline from joegriff

We were put into pairs and made to pick a genre and a target audience randomly, i happened to have war and teenage girls, when i saw this i knew that this was going to be really hard as there are not many war films that teenage girls would like.
We had to talk about why we chose the title name, the characters that we chose, how we were going to  create interest in the film! We talked about storyline, theme and settings, we had to say what makes our film different.
The feedback that we recieved on our film was average, the general consensus was that it was a little bit poor, it lacked some key ideas but the basis was there to make a good film as it was a new idea that other films have not done yet. 
Relevant/Intriguing/Catchy film title?
Positive Feedback: "Catchy, definitely grabbed my interest"
Constructive Feedback: "Isn't relevant to the film"
Average Score out of 10: 7
Interesting Characters and appropriate cast?
Positive Feedback: "All well known people"
Constructive Feedback: " Could be more characters" and "Not very diverse"
Average Score out of 10: 6
Was Interest created for the audience?
Positive Feedback: "Description of trailer would mostly grab interest"
Constructive Feedback: "Good idea but a bit confusing, be clearer"
Average Score out of 10: 8
Narrative suitable for target audience?
Positive Feedback: "Could be interesting to the audience"
Constructive Feedback: "Attracts perhaps more boys than teenage girls"
Average score out of 10: 5
Does the narrative fit the genre? Are there conventions in place?
Positive Feedback: "Unusual Genre" and "The main ideas are in place"
Constructive Feedback: " Sort of could be more for teenage girls" and "Doesn't really fit the genre nothing about conventions"
Average score out of 10: 6
Is the film different?
Positive Feedback: "It is unique"
Constructive Feedback: The film reminds me of some that I have seen before"
Average score out of 10: 7
Good ideas for marketing the film?
Positive Feedback: "Marketing if successful would make the film very popular"
Constructive Feedback: "Unrealistic offers" "Interesting ideas but perhaps unrealistic"
Average score out of 10: 8
Would you buy the film rights?
Unfortunately no one wanted to buy the film rights to our movie.
Overall scores out of 70:
56, 47, 40, 56, 47,34, 37, 42